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busboys and poets

  • Script » General, General Re: Getting Back With Ex

    A lazy writer is annoying. True that.

    Feb 22, 2008
  • Script » General, General Re: The Cane of Albrithi

    Amen to most unoriginal. Also, your formatting, particularly in the beginning, made it difficult to get through. Trim the fat, keep the good stuff.

    Feb 22, 2008
  • Script » General, General Re: Tabula Rasa

    I agree with smorg. This is rather too short, and you really should insert colons. It would prevent the reader from becoming confused.

    Feb 22, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A Haiku

    :lol: Brava!

    Feb 21, 2008


Every time I’ve gotten feedback that was hard to take it was usually hard to take because there was truth in it and I didn’t like that (or didn’t want to receive it). That’s not to say all harsh feedback is good or that we should be harsh for harshness’ sake, but learning to absorb truth without letting it break your inner core/break you is a lifelong skill that keeps your mind elastic and open to learning.
— soundofmind